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register in + courses 注册课程
- university != college
- college 一般指技校,更偏重于专业技能,不一定颁给学位,课业紧张如同高中
- university 则是指大学,学生有自己有的schedule,并获得学位
- 如果希望在文中提到college 和 university,不妨通过 colleges and universities来泛指
- on the one hand…on the other hand
- 在[14]中,第一段谈到的是classes is optional,而后文则是讲drop classes和leave classroom,意思太过了,应该保持一致用skip classes 或者 miss classes
- helpless 多指一个人无助
unable to manage independently
- 例子的开头需要注意引入!
Theoretical physicist Einstein xxx xxx
- again and again, here and there 太过于口语化,不够正式于书面用语
- something more urgent 中something同样也过于口语化
改为urgent matters
- engage 可表示积极参与,热衷于,用于教育方面很好
a hobby that engaged her for hours at a time. His smile engages everyone he meets.
- lost interest in interest是单数
- post-secondary 指高中以后的阶段
- students exercise their right to do sth. exercise 指运用
- 最后的结论段落,不应该引入新的概念和内容,而是对前文的肯定和复述
- 最后一段的最后一句最好针对论点做辩证讨论,展望和思辩
[14] 认为attending classes 应该为 optional,但是最后一句可以强调: However, if students miss too many classes, they may find that their marks are affected.